SMITHI had to leave her behind. Forget I ever laid eyes on her beautiful face.I did it to protect her… to shield her from the ugly side of the life I’m in.The life I chose.We left things UNDONE.UNFINISHED.My love might break her, but it’s what I crave– what I need… absolute submission she’ll accept me as her king. Because I’ve already decided, I’ll take her to be my QUEEN and when I … accept me as her king. Because I’ve already decided, I’ll take her to be my QUEEN and when I do–nothing will be UNDONE between us… we’ll be UNBREAKABLE.
But first, I need to win her back make her understand she was always in my heart, even when the only choice I had was to walk away.
LUCE…
My heart beats only for him. I waited but he never came. My heart turned to ice and now I’m determined no one will crack it again. But a dangerous man more ruthless than the first pursues me.
They both want me.
Desire me.
I’m lost in the woods but only one of them can take me home.
From AMAZON BESTSELLING AUTHOR JAX HART, UNDONE CREED MC #3. This is a standalone full-length novel. You can read this without reading the other two books. However, the author recommends reading in order.
*These series are less about the MC life and more about the men who run them.*
This is Smith & Luce’s Story… you first meet them in UNSCRIPTED #2 in the series.
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She wanted him so much so she waited and waited but he never appeared. Now someone else wants her and they will be even more dangerous. She is now alone and lost in the woods. Just one will take her home. Which one will take her? What will happen to the other? See who will take her home
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I enjoyed this book but have to admit it took me a little while to get into it as it started a little slow but once it picked up I was hooked. I really liked Luce and Smith they were perfect for each other I liked how he just knew she was his right from the start but things so sideways and he has to make some decisions to keep her safe but that break both of their hearts. This was a really enjoyable read.
Undone is the third book in the Creed MC series and Smith and Luce’s story. Smith is the Prez of the Creed MC and with power comes great responsibility. He finds the darkness and loneliness consuming until he meets Luce. She is strong minded and independent and just being in her presence calms him. When an outside threat forces him to push her away he starts to become someone else. A ruthless killer that will stop at nothing to ensure the safety of the woman he loves. Luce feels abandoned and betrayed and tries to move on, but his obsession to keep and control her sends her into the arms of another man. Will he be able to slay the dragons in time to claim the woman he loves or will it be too little too late?
So if you’ve read book 1 and 2 then book 3 will truly blow your mind. In it finally see what becomes of Luce and Smith. They have this fast, hot as Sin love affair that makes us blush so damn bad that we can’t tell if we’re coming or going. We watch as desire rolls off of them and watch as life gets in the way but one thing is for sure love is always the most powerful thing to try and break. It’s a fact that’s just proven when you think you lost something gut in all actuality it never left. Smith is the Prey but also a very very rich man who doesn’t show it and Luce is the fabulous artist afraid to act on it. But in the end 2 worlds collide and make for one happy ending. I can’t wait to read in this series. Jax Hart knows what’s what and I fully intend to be apart of this adventure. I give it 5 stars. I voluntarily read and reviewed this book as an Advanced Reader’s Copy.
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Love at first sight thrown away in the name of safety. The burden of the MC Prez patch will make Smith do the unthinkable to the women he loves in hopes that on day she will forgive him. I loved the story. Smith is like an unstoppable force, what he wants he will get one way or another. He never truly gives up on Luce but he made me so angry at times, confusing and throwing mixed messages at her when she is just trying to move on. Lucille’s character grows from a bit needy to strong and independent as she learns to depend on herself, accept that she can have a fulfilling life without Smith in it. Loved Roque. Now he has a story I hope we will get to read soon. I look forward to reading more from this very talented author.
Let’s start off my saying this is a brand new author for us and Wow ! just Wow !This story was griping intense,heart wrenching,tons of drama, was funny,exciting ,had wonderful character’s and had some major heat going on and we loved every second of it.What a page turner!
I always pick a favorite author but, It was really hard to choose but, we decided on Luce even though this story had a great cast of amazing characters.
Luce was a character that was fun,had a sense of humor,loving ,caring,is sensual ,artistic a little lonely and not comfortable in her own skin and quite emotional but, throughout the story she kept growing more confident and more comfortable in her own skin but, what she was not is a door mat for any man to walk all over anymore.We just loved her.She was just one of those character’s that was so easy to love.
Lucas- Now Lucas was all Alpha,tall dark, dangerous,had the looks of a mountain man, was a Dom in the bedroom and pretty much out of it lol,protective and possessive and done right scary and pretty much a A-hole most of the time but,with good reason. Omg ! I loved his and his mom’s relationship and all their uncomfortable conversations as they were down right hilarious together .Even with his A-hole-ish ways he was down right delectable and pretty much irresistible.He was definitely was fan worthy!
Not only did we love these character’s we loved,Dare,Rog,Duke,Rogue and we have to say we loved the old ladies as they were just priceless and a lot of fun.I have to say that there for a bit while I was swooning over Rogue the dark tall handsome deadly and dangerous Mafia King I was rooting him to win the prize.
Holy Hotness !
I have to say the author started the story off with a bang and kept us engrossed in the pages the entire time because once we started reading it we couldn’t put the book down until we were finished it. The story was just that good and we loved it.We are so looking forward to more books in this series and getting caught up with the rest of the series.Would love to see Rogue get his own story even if it was a novella where the MC & The Mafia King team up as we would loved to see more of him.I think we were just a little bit in love with him. Grins..
Also we wanted to mention that this story had one hot cover and we love it !
Recommended read to all !
this is a amazing read that will take you breath away. this is the 3rd book in this series. and ive felling in love this series and this book just adds to this amazing dark read that will take you on amazing twisted ride that will have you on the edge of your seat.
Wow! Wow! Wow! Holy crap Jax Hart has done it again! I knew Smith and Luce’s story would be a long, angsty road but this was so much more! So many twists and turns, epic battles, love found and lost. My heart hurt, my emotions were all over the place and dang if this book didn’t make me cry. The wait for this book was so worth it!
OH MY GODDESS this book is amazingly perfect. Smith and Luce are the ultimate couple. Please send me a Smith. This story takes you on one heck of an emotional journey. Ups, downs, back, forward, and round, and round. It’s one I absolutely would go on again. The writing and flow of this book is top notch. I absolutely recommend this book and series.
This is the third book in the Creed series, it is a MC romance following our two lead characters Luce and Smith. Luce starts out as a meek character, however throughout the story she gains confidence, more of a backbone, and asserts herself much more. Smith is an alpha male, Dom, and he is the president of the Creed MC, and one thing I can say about him is he knows what he wants and goes after it, such an alpha..be still my heart! I loved their journey and watching Luce and Smith fall in love. Their characters are so easy to like, complex, and fiercely loyal, and you won’t be able to help yourself from falling in love with them and the ones they call family. This story is raw, dark and emotional and filled with romance, action, and unexpected surprises. Absolutely brilliant book and series, I highly recommend you pick it up and read for yourself, you won’t be disappointed.
Smith and Luce had me flipping the pages to see what would happen next. At times i wanted to schmuck Smith upside the head, but I still loved him! I really wanted to tell Luce to go and smarten the man up, but alas i couldn’t! This story had everything in it to keep me on the edge and flipping the pages! I loved this and can’t wait for more!!!
This MC Prez goes on quite the mission to get his lady. The characters have a wild ride and amazing chemistry. Their journey will make you both love and hate The Prez. It is a well written book that I do recommend. So enjoy the ride.
Another wonderful MC novel by the “great” Jax Hart! This is Smith and Luce’s story. Talk about star-crossed love. Protecting those you love. Intense sadness…you need to walk away from the one you love, to keep her safe! Suspense, romance, action. I enjoyed the main and supporting characters. Hours of MC romance entertainment. If Jax Hart keeps writing these, I’ll keep reading them!
I received an ARC in return for an honest review. I have mixed feelings about Smith and Luce. The story had good bones I just personally need more buildup between them. I hate when they just fall in love in the first 5 minutes. I also prefer not to have the guys POV so much. It was an ok read.
Smith has changed, he’s not the man Luce remembers. Smith met Luce through Rog and his girl Dev. Rog owns The Sassy Wench Tavern, the club’s bar. One look is all it took and Smith instantly knew Luce was his. Luce is willing and wants to belong to Smith, but being with the Prez of Creed MC comes with a price. That price just might be Luce’s life.
Smith feels the only way he can protect Luce is by abandoning her. There’s a threat from another MC and Smith cant, will not, let Luce be harmed. He’d give her up before he would ever let that happen. In doing so, all hopes of a life with the only woman who’s ever meant anything to him would die. To save her, Smith will have to become someone even he will despise and form alliances with people so dangerous he may never be able to extricate himself.
AMAZING READ ! ! !
HOT, ALPHA OUTLAWS PROTECTING THEIR WOMEN WHILE AT WAR WITH RIVAL MC CLUBS ! FULL OF UNEXPECTED SURPRISES ! DARK, RAW DESIRE MIXED WITH INTENSE, EMOTIONAL PASSION ! ! ! SO EXCITED FOR MORE BOOKS IN THIS WILD, AMAZING SERIES !
This is the third book in this awesome series, and is Luce and Smith’s story. These two are complex characters who have intense chemistry between them. I loved all of the secondary characters, some old and some new. This is a well written story which is intriguing, intense, and with action and love. The only down side, and this is my opinion only, is that I felt this story started off slowly, and rushed towards the end. I look forward to reading more from this talented author, whose work I recommend for all.
This was the 3rd book in Jax Hart’s MC series. Everytime I read one of his books I say that’s the best story I have read so far.
Mr. Hart does not disappoint! As always its excellent writing with good strong characters. Each book can be read as a stand alone but I highly recommend you read in order as the other characters crossover. And you get your HEA!
Love love this series
UNDONE: A NEW CONTEMPORARY SECOND CHANCE MC ROMANCE by Jax Hart is a true second chance romance.
Smith and Luce burn up the pages when they are together, but when circumstances change and Smith must leave to protect her, what will she do. Luce must pick up the pieces and move on with her life.
Will she be able to, will she be there when Smith handles his business or will someone steal her from him? You will have to pick up your copy today to find out.
This author has a fan for life. He mixes the gritty, raw, and unpredictable MC lifestyle with the equally gritty and raw romances of the members and their chosen women. You won’t want to put the book down once you start – I know I didn’t. smith and Luce will light up the pages with passion and angst and will grab you on an emotional level to leave you exhausted and begging for more. Fabulous read.