It’s finally my time.
Time to escape from my mother, her crazy antics and questionable morals. I’m getting the heck out of Dodge, leaving the trailer park, to make something of myself. Everything was fine until I walked into The Unacceptables’ bar and met Abel Hellock. With his gorgeous muscles, tattoos, motorcycle and perfect smile, my knees quaked. My life was about to be sucked back into the … into the seedy underbelly I fought so desperately to climb out of.
Everything was fine until I met my step-brother for the first time.
18+ for sexual situations, language, and adult content.
It is a Step-Brother & MC romance!
This book is a standalone!
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This first book in the series has more than tweaked my curiosity. Life isn’t always rainbows and unicorns but Cricket finds both after meeting Abel. Their story twanged my “feels” strings. There is heart and soul thrown in with the grit and rawness that can accompany life. I look forward to diving into the lives of the members of The Unacceptables MC.
*WARNING* story contains explicit sexual content and violence
Short, but a full story. I liked this one! This does have some sex scenes, but the book isn’t over run with them. I like that this story isn’t excessively long, it makes them “fall in love” way fast, but it’s a romance so that’s a given. The story is interesting with all the feels. It’s well written and no editing issues that I noticed. Easily read in one sitting. I downloaded the rest in bad sets.
Definitely a quick, easy read. If you like rough and tumble MC series, then you would like this. I am going to get the next book or two to see how it moves.
Unacceptable was my first MC romance and Kristen Hope Mazzola has gotten me hooked on a new trope. Abel is such a swoon-worthy Alpha that I couldn’t get enough of him. He can be sweet and charming one second and all dirty and possessive the next. Unacceptable is a wonderful mix of sweet, sexy, and suspenseful.
Cricket had to get away from her mom and her life. Her dad was run off by her mom, and threatened him when he tried to take Cricket with him. She finally had enough with her life with her mom and left. She had one letter from her dad and had a address where he was last. She’s hoping he’s still there. When she stops in a bar Vilas and met Abel she was done for. Their road is long and hard.
This was not your typical step-brother or MC book. If you want something hot, funny and unexpected this is for you. It’s got a lot of emotions and a roller coaster of a ride. You will love the rest of the series.
I voluntarily read an Advanced Reader Copy of this book and loved it. It was a great quick read with strong characters, some drama, insta-love, and hot steamy scenes. I can’t wait to read the rest of this series.
I voluntarily read and reviewed an ARC of this book. This is the first book in the MC series. It’s a quick read with a HEA ending.
Cricket is tired of living her life and is determined not to follow her mom’s footsteps. So she packs up and goes in search of her dad.
Abel owns a bar and is vice president of the MC. He arrives at work one night and is blown away by the girl sitting at his bar.
What a great way to start a series. Can’t wait to read more.
This was my first read by her and I enjoyed this book. It was a quick read. I’m excited to read more of her books and to watch her writing grow. I’m ready for the next book in this series.
WOW!! This was an amazing book!! It was luckily a quick read because once I started it I didn’t want to put it down!! This is a must read!!
Unacceptable was a good read. Cricket is a woman looking for her future in the face of an ugly past. She meets Abel, the VP of an MC. Could he be the key to her future. This story is a quick read and I definitely enjoyed every minute of it
I really love this book!! It is packed full of action,love, heartache, and passion. I really love the characters from the main ones to the secondary ones. Abel and Crickets chemistry is felt as soon as they meet. This is a novella and I finished it pretty quick so if you want some that has everything that you can possibly want but don’t want a long book this is the perfect book for you!! My only complaint is the author has so much awesome material in this book that I wish she would have made it a novel!! Because I One I didn’t want this book to end and two like I said she had this book packed with so much high energy and information that she could have had a 5 Star novel on her hands here!!! But I still recommend this book!!!
I was able to pick up this ARC at Naughty in the South after meeting Kristen. I started this book and I could not put it down. This book has an excellent back story with Crickett and how she got to to where she was. Then she met Abel and all bets were off. You could feel that instant chemistry flowing off the pages as these two interact. Yes this is a stepbrother romance.. but it is SO not what you expect how it plays out. I found it fun and unique and very enjoyable. I love the MC aspect of it because it’s not the dominant story in it but it plays a signifigant part in it. It’s focus is on Crickett and Able. I so loved the little things that came into play as well. One word… WATERFALLS!
I truly enjoyed every moment in this book and I am very much looking forward to more from Kristen. She made this book fun yet serious. Quirky yet hot. Still need to get another Unicorn Duckie since my daughter stole mine…
Kristen Hope Mazzola has introduced us to her own Motorcycle Club and, in doing so, she has opened the doors to characters with grit. Each character we are introduced to has a past, but there is also a level of quiet, unquestioning acceptance between them all. Having a past isn’t something to be ashamed of, but rather a part of life.
Crickett is young, but has decided to take charge of her life and change her circumstances. She leaves her current rocky existence in search of her father and a love she vaguely remembers. As she reaches what she thought to be her first stop along her journey, she wanders into a bar, snags herself a job and comes face to face with our HOT leading man Abel.
Abel, the sexy MC Vice President, is cocky and sure of himself, pure Alpha, despite having his own rocky past.
You get to see the dominant and protective side of Abel rear it’s head when Kristen brings in some manly competition where Crickett is concerned. From here the relationship picks up and moves fast. You get to know the characters, but I always yearned to learn a little more about them. The taboo step brother romance isn’t hugely in your face, it is presented in a way that just has you questioning if it will present a roadblock or not. Crickett’s youth is palpable with her indecision and emotional choices, but you cannot help to love her and want her to find love.
I enjoyed this story of Crickett and Abel and look forward to more from this group of characters.
Quick amazing beautiful>Abel and Crickets love story.need more
Great beginning to this MC series!! Love Crickett and Able!! They were definitely meant to be together.
As crazy as this sounds, I have read other Unacceptables MC stories so it was fun to finally go back to the beginning to read Crickett and Abel’s story. This is a story of fate putting you in the right place at the right time to meet your destiny. This was a fast, easy read that totally held my attention and had so many feels.
Great MC book!
Crickett’s looking for answers in her life. She goes to Villa to find them, but she definitely finds more. When coming to a new town she needs to find work. When she does that she finds a man that make her heart skip a beat. Abel’s that man. He’s had a life in the town for a while. His families are important to him. He has a daughter Raine and his Step-dad. His MC club members are also his family.
The two families come together as one in a unique way for Crockett and Abel. You will love reading this book to find out how their two world come together in a great way.
I Loved this story! I love MC books and this one was great!
The story kept my attention from the first! I loved Cricket and Abel’s story! It wasn’t your typical step-brother romance.
There are twists and turns and hot, hot love scenes!
I can hardly wait for the next book in this series!
I love Kristen’s books!
I loved Cricket and Abels story. Kristen has a way to suck you into the story from the beginning. My only downfall is that it felt like it went way too fast. I have no issues with inta-love plots and that is what this was but it seemed like as soon as you are getting into the story its over.
Unacceptable is fast paced and has a wonderful storyline. The characters are ones you will fall in love with. Abel knows what he wants and will stop at nothing to make Crickett his. Crickett has left her mother, who only ever worried about her next fix, to find her father.
But what happens when Crickett and Abel see that they have more in common than just the attraction between the two of them?