“Hope was a dangerous thing. It could consume every dream and make them take flight, becoming wild daydreams in one’s heart and mind. Or hope could incinerate everything you thought you knew, burning you down to your core, leaving you raw and exposed for the world.”Emory Fae has only known one thing–life at The Academy, a school for those who have special abilities. Following in her parents’ … Following in her parents’ footsteps, the pressure to uphold their dream falls on her and one of her best friends–Adair Stratton. An outcast and feared by most, Adair longs to break away from the expectations dictating his future. With whispers of dark magic spreading across Kiero, Adair starts to doubt The Academy is all it seems.
An unexpected visit ignites new tensions as the roguish king from across the Black Sea, Tadeas Maher of the Shattered Isles, and his heir, Marquis Maher, sail to Kiero. Notorious for their pirating and wrath, for the first time in years, they demand the Faes listen to their proposition for a new treaty. Caught in the middle of politics, Adair and Emory, with the help of their best friends Brokk and Memphis, search for the one thing that matters the most–the truth.
Their world is tipped upside down as unlikely alliances are made, and war ravages Kiero. Through the throes of betrayal, lies, hidden magic, and love, Adair is faced with a life changing decision. Will he fight or bow to the darkness within?
But, Adair’s decision will change the course of Kiero forever, setting in motion irreversible destinies for everyone at The Academy as Emory Fae rises as heir.
Heir of Lies is the first book in the bestselling Black Dawn series.
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I loved this book and the world building so much! Also, I really liked the multiple POV points because I could get into each of the characters’ heads! Mallory knows how to write so well with dialogue that feels amazingly real!
Also, the boys! I love them all! Brokk is probably my favorite though! And I love Emory too! She’s strong and has to adjust to the things that have happened to her, but she finds a way to! Need the next book!
This book was received from the Author/Publisher, in exchange for an honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
By the synopsis, you think you are going to get this story from the perspective of Emory well it took 20 chapters for me to see her PoV. I’m not complaining but it was a waiting game. It took me much longer to read than I thought the percentage bar on my Kindle just didn’t seem to move lol. I might be a tad impatient.
I was entertained by this story. Even though you have multiple PoVs the story flowed seamlessly. When the PoVs switched the timeline continued to flow in one direction and was not broken up by everyone getting their own. Which I really enjoyed because it felt like I had less to track that way.
If you like action this book has a lot of battle scenes they are not gruesome but there are a lot of them.
This is a strong first book in what looks to be a five-book series.
(I received this novel as an ARC. All opinions are mine and freely given.)
‘Heir of Lies’ by Mallory McCartney left me absolutely conflicted, so bear with me as I work through the things I’m feeling. There are about two quotes in the entire novel I find worthwhile to ever repeat.. and I will share one of them with you.
“He was a darkened duet of body and ability, the two forces creating a lethal harmony.”
Sadly, the writer mostly falls back on cliche television statements most of us have made jokes with.
“Naturally, you have to understand I can’t tell you where that is located, or I will have to kill you.”
The story is about a.. well.. it’s sort of a soap opera. The main character is a princess named Emory Fae. She’s a girl with an extraordinary gift, in a world where some have special abilities and others have none. Like any society, of course, the majority of one group looks down on the other. All told in the longest, most convoluted way you can imagine, and for the first 30% or so of the book.. also the most mind-numbing. If our grandparents were right and rolling our eyes or making faces too many times might freeze them that way, I’d be dealing with the aftermath of that right now.
There is.. and this is going to sound strange.. an overabundance of text within the spines of this book. What I mean by that is.. the author has a tendency to go on and on, throwing a lot of lovely words onto a page.. often without any real sense of direction. Long drawn out sentences, which by the time you’re finished reading, fail to make any real sense because many of those words feel like they’re simply there to fill the book. Such an effort made to use descriptors, that the statements become absurd. Like, “..revealing Nyx’s uncanny ability to have stone cold features.” Really? Being able to remain sober faced is an uncanny ability.. in a place where characters can possess others, take another’s abilities, or control the elements? But she’s straight-faced.. so.. that’s uncanny.
Another thing this story suffers from is overkill. Quite like the last twenty minutes of The Departed. I realize the title is ‘Heir of Lies,’ but nearly everyone in this story is hiding something major, and it’s not even interesting most of the time. One group brings about horrible things because they lied, the next group is aghast at such behavior. That group follows the same path and surprise, the next situation is reacted to in the very same way. It’s actually so repetitive that it’s ridiculous.
I feel like maybe at one point the author was moved by a series like ‘Game of Thrones,’ where literally no character is ever really safe.. and while that can be really interesting over the course of years, several books, seasons, what have you.. within one title it’s such a narrow window of processing time that it feels a bit desperate.
In fact, this might have made an all right tv series. It’s got a really good core. Deep down below all the fluff and missteps, the idea of the story is intriguing. Some of the characters are charismatic and interesting. Brokk, Marquis, Roque, Nei, Adair.. all characters with a ton of flair and fascinating backstories. All characters with a ton of potential. And there are glimpses of an author who understands how to develop them, but they’re fleeting. Unfortunately, the main character isn’t interesting at all. She’s mildly annoying at best and often useless.
More than most titles, the few days I spent reading this book, felt like weeks. Not because so much occurred within it, nor because years and years passed by in the timeline. Though, those things are true too. But because with the exception of a handful of scenes centered mostly on the characters I named above, it was just delivered in a way that bored me to death. Things would occur and then someone would conveniently explain why they happened that way. Oh, there was some secret they didn’t tell before.. or.. some thing they didn’t realize was important until the moment, but that just meant it read like the author also didn’t know how to develop the story properly. It became, show the situation, download the excuses to the reader. Over and over.. and over. And then, after spending what felt like weeks reading the story, to find it end in the middle of the resolutions with a cliffhanger.. was just kind of frustrating.
I’ve said it before, there are times when cliffhangers work, even are necessary.. but they’re few and far between.. and this wasn’t one of them. There’s no way I’d willingly read a second book to find out what happens. I’m just going to pretend things went the way I think they should have.. and move on.
Honestly, if a really good, really experienced editor took this writer aside, it might even be fixable. But as it is, I can’t in good conscience recommend it.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
This is a YA Fantasy novel and it’s one of the better ones I’ve read.
It contains an academy for people with special abilities to keep them safe but now their world is being rocked by war.
The writing is very descriptive and feels like your actually in the place that’s being described. The characters are well fleshed out throughout the story.
I liked this story and would read more from this author.