Breaking All the Rules is an erotic short story of a submissive’s first time attending a luxurious BDSM ball. Caroline is under strict orders not to play with anyone other than her Master, but when she notices a smoldering hot Derrick the attraction is instant and all consuming. Can she make it through the night obedient to her Master or will she forever be changed from one forbidden encounter?… encounter?
“The dominant in him not liking me turning my back on him but the man in him dying to have me. The fire in his eyes scared and excited me at the same time because I knew in that moment he said fuck the rules.”
-Excerpt from Breaking All the Rules
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Great short story it’s hot and steamy with the 3 main characters. All I wanted was to keep reading the book when I finished reading the book.
Thank you for allowing me to review this book it was great.
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So this was the first time reading this authors work and I really enjoyed it and am looking forward to reading more.This was a great story .Has a great storyline and great characters to read about.Plus was steamy hot to.Once I started reading it , I couldn’t put it down til I finished it.
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Caroline meets Derrick at a party. She is instantly attracted to him. Ben gives her a certain amount of freedom for the night. Derrick capitalizes on the opportunity, and Caroline doesn’t deny him. Good book well written, short read.
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This is fastpaced short story that I enjoyed reading. A good storyline and characters. Could read more about Caroline and her adventures.
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Breaking All The Rules is a quick read but a hot one. Caroline is submissive to a dominant man who is more possessive than loving. He decides one day to take her to the dominant’s ball, a place she had always been denied. Believing he is there to seek yet another submissive, she watches the crowd. When her Master’s attentions lie elsewhere that’s when things get sexy.
Wow, Breaking all the Rules was really bite-sized in length. As result, I didn’t really get a feel for the main characters Caroline and Derrick.
The few things I did notice are that Caroline sounds very young and vain. I had a hard time connecting with her character. Although she is submissive, she comes off as a dominant. The way she acts during sex is also aggressive and dominant. I am not well versed in the D/s lifestyle but I truly don’t think a true submissive would act the way she does.
Master Derrick, we don’t really get to know at all in this book.
The interaction between this Master and sub strikes me as odd as there respective roles seem reversed. Derrick does not come off as the Dominant man he claims to be in either word or action while submissive Caroline takes the lead in their sexual encounter.
The story line and the writing are ok. I am still interested in finding out more about this couple and where they as well as the story line are headed. I am planning to read the second installment Pleasure & Punishments.
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Breaking All the Rules, Part One is a very short story of a submissive taken out to a fancy party for the first time. Going there she knew her Dom was on the look out for another girl he could bring home and this made Caroline hurt and upset. When she meets Derrick he ignites something in her and because of this strong connection she does something that causes great pain and abuse in her life. This short story really pulled me in. I wanted to know more about sweet Caroline and what happens next. It was a very enticing short read.
This book is fabulous. It is an amazing story of an older man younger woman story. It is fast pace, well written and interesting – before you know it you are at the end wanting more.
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A submissive is taken to a party and makes a connection she shouldn’t indulge.
This one is very short, but for all that you actually get a story. There is a bit of background and three main characters, enough to tell a quick sensual story. The story is well paced and well written, told from the perspective of our heroine. There is a bit of sex, as would be expected, and it is short but erotic, like the rest of the story. There is no cliffhanger, but at the same time it is very obvious this is just the start of the story. Well worth the read.
Highly recommended.
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She has broken So many rules and she is now with a new master who is pushing her further and further. What she does not know is she is being prepared for new masters? Who will she finally get? Can she finally escape from him? See what will happen
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The storyline is interesting and well developed. The characters are engaging and well written I enjoyed getting to know Caroline and her Master Ben.
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Breaking the Rules is the prequel to LaSasha Flame’s new series and is a quick read focusing on Caroline, a submissive, and Master Ben, her dom. When Ben takes her to the Master’s Ball, she is instruction she is off limits to all the other doms. But Caroline is hurt as he is seeking out another submissive. She is approached by Master Derrick and their attraction flourishes. The book is definitely an adult read and ends in a cliffhanger. The next book in the series is Pleasures and Punishments.
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This is the start of the series of Caroline and Master Ben. She meets Master Derrick. This is a short story, just the introduction for at least two more books. I loved the characters what little we know about them. I thought it flowed well and so far is a good plot line. This is more harder than some of other erotica. It was good. Cannot wait for the other books.
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Quick and Sexy
Sometimes you have to break a rule or at least bend them to see just how far you can go.
This book is quick, sexy and enjoyable. Looking forward to seeing book 2.
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A new author to me
I really enjoyed this
great character development and enjoyed the story
Looking forward to more from this author
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Breaking all the Rules by LaSasha Flame is the intensely steamy story of Caroline. The man she is with seems to be getting bored with her. But, he takes her to a party where she is off-limits. But, she meets Derrick and things start to get interesting…..
This is #1 in the Breaking Rules Series. It is a very short story that is a prequel to the next story…ends in a bit of a cliffhanger….but, I REALLY enjoyed the story!!!!
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This is the first book in the series and is a fast-paced read. Caroline is a submissive and is attending a BDSM ball with her Master. He gave her strict orders not to play with anyone else. Will she be able to resist temptation? Loads of drama, suspense and steam. I liked it.
Fortunately a quick read, because it was a cringe worthy one. Caroline was breed, born, and raised to be a submissive slave. Her mother was owned by a guy that’s kink was breeding women!??! This is my problem with these books. This should come with a warning. On her 16th birthday, the man who was like a father to her takes her for the first time. Now he expects her total subservience to him at all times. When he takes her to a BDSM ball, she sees how different men can be. This was just too creepy for me and I read some pretty dark books.
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A great short sexy story, first book in the series, good intr6to characters with some back story, fantastic forbidden steamy sexy scene to finish. I wonder what the consequences will be in book two, cannot wait to read it.
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This prequel is a dark look at a BDSM story that will have you fanning yourself it’s so hot. An erotic read that leaves you wondering what will happen next to Caroline when she disobeys her Master.
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