Who will have the pleasure of training Petal? By rights, the honour should go to Mark Matthews, but the cowboy has other plans. The matter is not settled until the stable owner is brought into the fray.
It is to be a monumental first week for Albrecht’s newest trainee. The pony girl will have two days to find a way of coping with her new latex bodysuit and the rigorous buzzing and pumping of the … pumping of the never-ending ‘device’ which torments her every waking moment. She will then find herself shipped off as a sex-slave, chained and caged, to the mysterious high-bidder from the auction.
It doesn’t take Petal long to realise that her chances of escaping from Albrecht are slim at best, but her defiant nature won’t let her give up hope just yet. There is a way out for her, but she may have to give up more than her sanity in order to achieve it.
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I loved this much longer installment of the Pony Tales series. We got more gloriously kinky pony play, more dub-con deliciousness (which Jennifer enjoys immensely) along with lots more clues and hints as to what is in play behind the scenes. There was more of Mark in his ‘real’ life and some scenes of him at play with his submissives.
I will say that we still aren’t at a ‘romance’ point in the story, though there is a definite connection between Mark and Jennifer. There are scenes that some might interpret as cheating, or on the borders of it, but as there is no actual relationship/commitment between them, I don’t view it as such.
Jennifer learns some shocking truths in this book, enough almost to break her resolve. She also suffers the consequences of her naive/foolish trainer choice. Added to all that, she is subject to 48 hours of the most cruel sexual torture, humiliated beyond belief, set impossible to achieve tasks, barely fed and watered, driven to exhaustion and abused by a sadist. Despite all that she finds herself enjoying much of it and using the rest of it to keep herself angry and sane.
The writing is good, with some nice little touches of humour. The plot moves along well and this is an excellent read for when you want to indulge in a scorching hot, NSFW, filthily depraved story but also want a decent plot with it, rather than just crudeness. I’m off to read the final book now!
When I start in this part of the Pony Tales, I knew earlier parts had been written. Too bad I didn’t read the other parts to find out how it all started and how Jennifer got her name Petal.
Even though I haven’t read other parts, I could kind of imagine what happened beforehand.
Great to see the power of Petal in this part. Despite everything that happened to her, she is still not broken. 48 hours wearing a latex suit that keeps bringing you to the point of orgasm and then stopping again is mega tiring. Add to that the things she has to do under Kyle’s direction without giving in to his sense of power over her is wonderfully described. Degrading is at the top of Kyle’s list of breaking the spoiled rich woman in this way doesn’t work. It pisses him off and his sadistic side comes out even more to the point that he almost broke Petal. Mark prevents her from going through life scarred and tries to buy her free. Well, free is a big word. He tries to buy her to make her a house slave.
The sex scenes are beautifully described. Feelings of shame, humiliation, pain, going beyond your limits. I felt it all while reading it. Luckily I have the last part to read now because the cliffhanger is sublime
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So much going on here, with suspense and intense emotions. Complex storylines that will go into the next book. Family turning their backs and causing the pain and heartbreak. The characters have strength and learn to adapt until they can make their move.
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My first time reading from this series. And it is one hot book! The characters are interesting and entertaining. The chemistry is very exciting to read. Wow from the beginning to the end!
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This is a s** slave story. Petal is being trained to be a s** slave but will she be able to escape? The storyline has drama conflict and lots of detailed scenes
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Whole lot of delicious struggle going on
—>>> Whatever Jenny thought she could handle at Albrecht’s has had to be reworked in her mind. The devil she thought she knew turned out to be the lesser evil. Whole lot of delicious struggle going on in our main characters! I am now on the edge of my seat to know what will shake out in the conclusion of this amazing series for all these engaging characters!
I’m loving the book, this series has been fantastic. The book really sucks you in from the start. While reading the book I was feeling hot just from reading. The BDSM play was amazingly written.
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Pony Girl training is rigorous, stern, and exceedingly harsh. Will it be Mark or Kyle who will be chosen to teach Jenny the rituals involved in acceptable pony behavior? Will it matter to her? Oh, it definitely will concern her in a variety of ways too numerous to mention.
This story is full of Ms. Mandara’s well thought-out, titillating, obfuscated, sometimes sadistic methods of highly effective kinky BDSM. Will Jenny be able to survive her trials and her trainer?
Once I began reading, I had no desire to stop. Now, I am eagerly looking forward to the next book.
This is the first book in the series that I have read. I will go back to read more. This is a kink BDSM specific book. I loved the characters. The way some were easy to hate and others you liked and even others you were not sure about. I enjoyed this book very much. I hope to see some retribution in the other books to come. I will go back and read the others so I get a full picture of the story. I thought it was a good story with action and twists. Well done C.P. Mandara
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This installment jumped right in from where the last book left off. Considering it had been a few months since I read the last one it took me a bit to get reacquainted and remember where we left off.
The punishments have been stepped up, the story has gotten deeper and more twisted. Mark’s life outside of the stables has been opened up to us.
The author’s ability to paint such graphic scenes continues to impress me. I can’t wait to read the final book.
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Let’s get the annoying thing out of the way first. This book, like the preceding four in the series doesn’t stand alone. Each book builds on what has come before and you need to read it all to make sense of the characters.
Now the good; and there’s a lot more good than the bad. The story is hot, very hot indeed, with many tortures for Jenny as the story covers two days of her training as a pony. Perhaps more torture than training, but she’s new and has to learn. We learn a little more (though with hints of more to come) about why she’s at the stable and what can happen when a stubborn submissive meets an awful sadist.
If you’ve read the first four books, you will definitely want to read this one, and it will leave you hungry for more. So, bottom line, it’s a good and exciting book to read.
So freaking good. Read in one sitting because I couldn’t put it down. Entertaining well written book. Exciting characters. A must read.
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Jenny’s and Mark adventures continue – you should start with books one to four to catch up on this erotic thriller of a series
She landed an over the top villain sadistic trainer and goes beyond kink into real danger
Both heroes have enemies that look ready to swoop in and do more damage
I’m only disappointed there’s a big cliffhanger and have to wait for part 6 before any resolution to this suspenseful super kinky tale
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Jenny gets sold by her father to the Albrecht. She is to train as a pony girl, dressed as a pony. She has to be submissive to her trainer and do as he asks. She is a sex slave to Kyle, who is in charge of her training. Jenny is attracted to Mark and was hoping to fall under his domain. Erotic and unusual. A very entertaining novel.
A wonderful read, thoroughly entertaining
This was an entertaining read that once you start reading you will not be able to put this book down and you will not be disappointed when you reach the end, full of surprises and very well written
Mark the Dom in this book is a very strong character who has an intense character it is a most defining thing about this character and I am sure that you will find yourself to be totally drawn in to this wonderful tale.
The plot in this book is complex and as it thickens it becomes apparent that there is a great deal going on that you cannot even fathom, this is a highly entertaining read that you will not be able to put down once you begin reading this complex and entertaining story.
This is a thrilling and heart wrenching read and you will be totally blown away by this book and the characters within its pages.
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I thoroughly enjoyed the book and look forward to reading any future publications; keep up all the great writing.
This book is not going to be for everyone as it’s dark and concentrates on pony play. The plot is well developed, and the author doesn’t let up on the suspense throughout the whole book. The characters also have depth to them, and some are not all that likable. It’s a book that is easy to read in one sitting as it’s not overly long and it is intriguing.
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Our heroine is approaching the end of her training. Will she escape before it is complete, or will she end up shipped off to parts unknown?
This is book five of the series. It works fine as a standalone, but might be enjoyed more if read in order. The book starts where the last one ends.
This is a short erotic story with a BDSM theme and lots of bondage. The story is well written and easy to read. The training has gotten rather intense (as if it wasn’t before) and we are nearing the end. There is still plenty of steam. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this story and I look forward to more from this author
Highly recommended
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Once I started reading I couldn’t stop. It’s a fascinating story that is intense and surprising. Some of the characters have a lot to answer for and hopefully we see it in the next book. I enjoyed the unexpected twists in this story. I received an arc of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Pretty Pink is in trouble again. She’s made a huge mistake and doesn’t realize it until too late. The punishments continue and her hope slips as she wonders if she’ll always be captive in the Albrecht stables. There are grand plans for her and competing trainers who want to be the one to make her into the best of the best. There are so many questions and the author has led us through this tale with good pacing and great characterizations. A few typos, such as taught instead of taut, but otherwise a good read.
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Not for everyone.
At all. This one seriously misses the point and lacks an understanding of actual play.
It’s just mean.