As a young werewolf Scarlett never felt like she fit in. She couldn’t shift like a werewolf, not even on the full moon. She blames her weakness on the fact she is a half breed, part werewolf and part human. She moves with her mother and her mother’s new mate, Dominic, to the town of Luna. Scarlett fears she won’t fit in and that her secret will be discovered. She befriends Eli, the pack leaders … leaders son, and Ricky his best friend. Scarlett soon finds herself falling for Ricky. She begins to discover who she is, and more importantly what she really is as she tries to find her place in the new pack.
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Ok read that was a creative story, with good characters, some action and some romance. I was a little disappointed with the spelling errors and this could be more.
Boy, this book is just a huge mess, and not in any good way. Thank god it was free! I mean, otherwise it would have been like paying for an elementary school assignment, because this book was pretty much at that level.
I refuse to believe that this author is any older than 14 years old, if even that. If she is a preteen then at least she has an excuse for her writing. If she is an adult then this is just sad: “I walked out to the garden. I sat down in the garden. The garden was lovely”. You can’t build sentences like that. If you are an adult then that should be obvious. It’s pretty much writing 101 to know how to form sentences without using one word in every sentence. Also, “however”, “although”, “and” and “comma” is not illegal to use to form the writing. As it was, I found it extremely stilted and awkward.
Then we come to the characters. I found Scarlett very unrealistic. From one second she has a very low self esteem and then suddenly she thinks the world of herself and her looks. Not only that, she falls in love with every man in a ten mile radius that she is not related to. To make it even worse, every man loves her too even though she doesn’t give them much reason to. I mean, when she met Ricky and Eli she was nothing but a b***h towards them , yet throughout the story both comes to love her and she even ruins their friendship.
The most unrealistic part was that Ricky and Scarlett went from hate to love without any hint or sign that that’s was where their relationship was headed. And then the same thing happened when they broke it of. Suddenly all feelings were gone and Eli was the new love interest without any sort of development leading there … and then Laurie. Sigh. need I say more?
What was the point of Anna and Hope? They were introduced in the story like they where going to have a small part in it, but the author just dropped it immediately and never mentioned them again. And Elijah seemingly having some sort of part in the story, but it is never explained why or what. He just showed up without any explanation as to how he knew to show up and help out. He is just conveniently there every time he is needed. No questions asked. Why?
This story seems to be about a spoiled brat that can only feel sorry for herself and keeps making crap decisions. Unrealistically everyone loves her and she keeps going after their love like it’s some sort of approval for the actions she takes, however bad the actions are (like ruining someone’s friendship, or even agreeing to have a strangers babies because she is told so). That’s my summary of the story that I read. If someone else had taken the plot and idea behind the story and written this book, I bet it would have been great. As it is now, a one star rating is a good place for this book.