Filthy Marcellos: La Cosa Nostra is not just a choice of regime and routine, it’s a culture. Born as mafia royalty, the Marcello brothers were raised ingrained with the beliefs and rules of what it meant to be a Mafioso prince. It is for life. Their status is considered a given right. They will always be these people. They will always be Marcellos. Family first. God second.From bosses and sons, … second.
From bosses and sons, to husbands and lovers. Made men, fathers, and killers. Life is a chess board in Cosa Nostra and these men are the kings.
You can’t be a Marcello if you’re not filthy.
The Complete Collection features the short novel Antony, and the three full length novels Lucian, Giovanni, and Dante. It also includes the 20k prequel to the Legacy series, featuring the Filthy Marcellos next generation.
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This book and the singles have no business being on the shelves in this pathetically sloppy shape. Over 100 edits. I am so disappointed and frustrated. This is a decent story but the author has sold it in draft shape. This is close to being one of the worst! I’ve set aside over 100 edits _ wrong words ie public bone instead of pubic bone – wrong tenses, missing words and sentences that make absolutely no sense whatsoever. I bought this book because I thought this author was well known and had good ratings. This book was over 10 bucks, it has over 100 edits! That is just ridiculous. Paying readers deserve books that are properly edited and proofed – that is your job! Many of the edits are in the notes session on goodreads. Here is only a few. What’s worse, this is a box set. Unfortunately, I had the displeasure of realizing that all these stupid mistakes are also in the 4 single books as well as the boxset so the author sold the same books in the same sloppy shape with no proofreading or editing twice for each book. You should be ashamed at yourself – basically it’s ripping readers off.
SLOPPY SLOPPY – any writer knows editing and proofing is part of YOUR job.
ANTONY
Never touch or look at another man of honor’s wife. === ?? Makes no sense
Before Antony could say another thing, Cecelia left her spot at the sink and the dirtied dishes still needing cleaned, pushed past his stunned form in the entryway, and disappeared down the hallway.=== dishes that still needed cleaning,
He was muttering about and going it.”=== ??? And once again, makes no sense!!!!!
LUCIAN
She can’t forget it, and I don’t mind a bit that she gets to see the man’s son happy, healthy, and rich in many form. === forms.
I thought if I just kept her hid long enough, he’d either give up or mess up.” === hidden
How could be have made her feel like she was his whore? === could he
She is the one soul on earth I couldn’t stand to see hurt because of me, so I make sure she doesn’t ever have to.” === so I make sure she isn’t, ever.”
Lucian scanned the small signs on the building with the address he’d been given, noting the lawyer’s they needed to speak with was located towards the alley. === were located
“The idiot willing took money from someone he doesn’t know and can’t identify, plus was going to get a double payday off the money you brought for the Lexus. === willingly === plus he was getting a double
Her body would just being to sing with the tremors of an oncoming orgasm before he’d slow it down, suckling and massaging her back to a breathless, trembling mess. === beginning
I haven’t even made face with you, yet.” === ???
and John didn’t want you making choices about love and marriage for the only reason there was money involved. === marriage using only money as a reason.
“At the time, it was a two-point-three million. === it was 2.3 million. (delete ‘a’)
GIOVANNI
“You’re welcome. It’s going to rot with me. I have better things to do.” === ???? Makes no sense
Hands that were far too warm placed down to her skin over and over, annoyingly so. === Makes no sense!!!!!!!
If you pull some kind of nasty shit like that on me again, so help you God, I will chain you to a wall. === so help me God,
Hate me, go on ahead and do it. I === go ahead I want everyone to know what I do to you like this.”
DANTE
“No. As I said, why bring a woman into a life where she will have little but me, and I don’t have a great deal to give her back. I’m perfectly fine like this.” === little of me, “She’s here for a couple of reasons, but mostly importantly, because she is going to be my wife and our business may overlap at times. ==== most importantly
Cat surveyed the entire scene in silence, catching on quickly that there was more to the issue here that just the surface. === than the surface.
“Some probably even lied, but I wouldn’t be surprised. ===
“I wouldn’t be surprised if some even lied.”
His words were gut off with a thick humfp sound as he was knocked from his barstool. === cut off
“Pregnancy isn’t a concern,” Catrina said, filling in a black Dante didn’t have to say. === filling in a blank
They don’t want whoever delivering their products, they want the queen. == is,delivering
“Maybe so, but I also haven’t made much of an effort to let her be, either.” === let her in either.”
Sweet fingernails Dante loved feeling claw down his back danced on his neck. “No women, right, bello?” === back, also danced
Catrina dropped the camera, so Dante lowered his hand. “Used to be?” “The last few years have been a busy time for me. I just lost interest as other shit became more important.” “A photographer, huh?” Catrina asked, dangling the camera from two fingers. === did she drop it or dangle it from 2 fingers???
Dante shrugged, hooking one of Catrina’s legs over his shoulder as he kissed her public bone. === pubic bone
“Like a filthy sugared sin right down to your core.” === makes no sense
He shoved the waist band of his boxer-briefs down around his hips and freed his erection to his palm. === fed his (this book’s in no shape to be sold!!) pathetic!
Excellent mafia romance
In love with this family!! They are sweet generous and very committed to family, but at the same time you piss them off or hurt one of their own and it becomes one Filthy dangerous explosion.